Hi MJ, this is a beautiful poem. I can definitely see your writing skills improving day by day. I love how you've incorporated Cook Island culture into your work and how you've talked about what you can hear through a simile. Ka pai!
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Hi MJ, this is a beautiful poem. I can definitely see your writing skills improving day by day. I love how you've incorporated Cook Island culture into your work and how you've talked about what you can hear through a simile. Ka pai!
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